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              Chaper 1
"MysticWhisker?" Cried the squeaky voice that belonged to a she-kit. "When will Rockykit open her eyes? We want to play! She cried.
           "We?" Thought Rockykit. Could there be someone else with this kit? "I wonder who she's talking about..."
Rockykit then heard another voice. It sounded more mature than the first voice she heard."Bluekit, Rockykit will decide when she wants to open her eyes. But now must not be her time." This voice also belonged to a she-cat.
A heavy sigh was heard. Then one of the kits screeched in Rockykit's ear. "PLEASE WAKE UP, ROCKYKIT!!!" The tom kitten was then disapointed when he found out that Rockykit only buried her nose deeper within her paws, and whinned. "Aww! It didn't even work!"
The young and impatient tom ended up being scolded. "Branchkit!" said the nearby she-cat. "Don't be rude to your sister!"
"Sorry, Rockykit." Said the tom-kit. "You can open your eyes when you're ready. There's no rush."
"I wasn't going to wake up to your command anyway!" Thought Rockykit as she scrunched up her nose.
Another queen then started to speak. "Perhaps there is something wrong with Rockykit." She said.
"Hm?" Replyed the voice that belonged to Mysticwhisker. "What makes you think that?"
There was silence for a moment. "Well. You see," the other queen was a little nervous. She didn't want to make Mysticwhisker angry. "Bluekit opened her eyes as soon as she was born. Don't you think Rockykit is a little late?"
Mysticwhisker hissed. "How dare you suspect there is something wrong with my kit! You don't see me complaining about Branchkit, Bramblekit, Paintkit and Poisenkit, do you?"
The other queen sounded a little regretful of what she said. "No. That's not at all what I'm saying."
"Then what are you saying? Are you calling me a lier, Stormcloud?"
"Oh no." Thought Rockykit. "All of this fighting is because of me! I need to do something!" Rockykit slowly blinked open her eyes. She noticed that she was sleeping in some kind of moss. So that's what was so comfy...
"Hey!" Said Stormcloud in surprise. "It looks like Rockykit has finally opened her eyes! Now I'm not in trouble anymore, right?" She nervously looked around.
Mysticwhisker ignored Stormcloud, and went over to her kit to greet her. "It's great to finally meet eye to eye, Rockykit." She slid her paw underneath Rockykit's neck, and guided her head toward Mysticwhisker's. "What beautiful eyes you have! Dark green, like your father's." She removed her paw from Rockykit's neck and put down her paw. "And your fur is exactly like mine! Fluffy and soft. No markings in sight. Simple, yet absolutely gorgeous! The most perfect shade of brown there is!"
Suddenly, a blue-grey she-kit stepped in between Rockykit and Mysticwhisker. She had dark blue eyes that blended with her coat. Her fur was sleek and smooth, also with no markings. She had a smile on her face. This kit looks really nice! "Hi! My name's Bluekit!" She said, joyfully. "You may not know this, but, we're sisters!"
From behind Bluekit, Rockykit noticed that Mysticwhisker backed up, and sat down in her nest. A brown she-kit took her place, and stood behind Bluekit. The brown she-kit had 3 stripes across her back, and two on her right fore-paw. She had forest green eyes. The striped she-kit suddenly put her fore-paws on Bluekit's back, and leeped over her. She was now nose-to-nose with Rockykit. What are you doing? Thought Rockykit. The striped she-kit then backed up a little, giving Rockykit some room to breathe. "My name's Bramblekit! I'm not your sister, but we can still be friends, right?"
Before Rockykit could answer, a plain, dark brown tom-kit pushed Bramblekit out of the way. Then he turned to face Rockykit. "My name's Branchkit! I'm related to Bramblekit!" Bramblekit didn't seem to walk up to Branchkit and stop him. She just plopped down and the stone floor, and started to lick her fur.
Another kit, this time time and blackish grey tom, politely nudged Branchkit away with his pink nose. Then, he faced Rockykit. "Um," he mumbled, "my name's Poisenkit. And, um, I'm related to Branchkit, Bramblekit, and Paintkit."
Rockykit stared at him. "Poisenkit? That names sounds a little evil..." Said a quiet Rockykit.
Poisenkit's ears went up in surprise, and he started to cry.
"Wait! I didn't mean it! Please don't cry..." Pleaded Rockykit.
Poisenkit ran over to his mother Stormcloud, who is a grey she-cat with blue eyes. She glared at Rockykit, then at Mysticwhisker. "Who knew your kit's first words could be her meanest." She said in an iritated tone. Stormcloud then turned her gaze toward Poisenkit. "Dont worry, Poisenkit." She said while petting his back with her large, fluffy tail. "I think your name is beautiful. Too bad some cats don't agree with me."
The last, but not least, kit stepped up to Rockykit. For some reason her fur was magenta, and light pink. Her fur was as soft as ever, and her eyes were also green. This must be Paintkit. "Poisenkit already told you about me but, my name's Painkit. And as he said, I'm related to him." She then pulled Rockykit out of her nest, and started to push her out of the nursery from behinds. But enough of all this introducing garbage! Let's go play!"
This is chapter one of my fanfiction. I hope you enjoy it. PLease comment if you want the rest of the chapters
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:iconxxangelpeacexxda:
xXangelpeaceXxDA Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
what happened to cloud kit o3o
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:iconmisssylveon:
MissSylveon Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You'll find out once I post part 2
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:iconxxangelpeacexxda:
xXangelpeaceXxDA Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
x3
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:iconmisssylveon:
MissSylveon Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
did you hear about chapter 2 of attack of darkclan? It's out
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:iconxxangelpeacexxda:
xXangelpeaceXxDA Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
couse i didz x3
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:iconmisssylveon:
MissSylveon Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
okay. Just wanted to know
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:iconxxangelpeacexxda:
xXangelpeaceXxDA Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lul
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pepemanera Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
interesting!
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MissSylveon Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Would you like me to continue?
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pepemanera Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2014
yes please!
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